It's my cyberpunk-esque story about a young hotshot thief, an old guy who's the pro, a woman in black leather, a conniving nightclub owner, the big city, online worlds, and computer crime. You know, one of *those* stories.
If you're a Critter and want to give it a crit, great! I will make sure to return the favor when a story of yours comes up. Here's a direct link to the story (requires Critters account).