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slowly revising "The Fishing Trip"

Crawled through the first five pages today at Peets. Daryn needs to be more active, so that carries through the entire story and it is tough going. While driving home afterwards, I realized that I want to take a scene and move it up (as part of Daryn being active) and that will be a chunk of work.

I know now that the decision is to stay as opposed to going with the old man, but I'm not yet at the point where I can show the decision being made or the turning point. The ending is still in flux. I'll get as far as I can before sending it to SacSpec for next week's meeting.
Tags: fishing trip, writing

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