jeffsoesbe (jeffsoesbe) wrote,

"This Moment" moves along

Working through the cleanup rewrite of "This Moment". Cleaning up scenes, making everything a little tighter, adding bits here and there. I think it's starting to come together. Hopefully I can get through this version tomorrow, then do a "full read and tweak" version before sending it off.

There are still parts that really get to me, even after months with the story. I think that's a good thing.
Tags: this moment, writing

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