jeffsoesbe (jeffsoesbe) wrote,

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more on "Walls of Stars"

Worked through the second scene (Andre and Jaqueline) and into the third scene (Andre, Zana, Leila and Chelsea). On the verge of the second half of the third scene (Andre and Chelsea). Also couldn't avoid tweaking the first scene (Andre and Zana).

At about 1600 words so far. I'm liking the story, especially the characters. Hopefully that should carry through to the end.
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