jeffsoesbe (jeffsoesbe) wrote,

  • Location:
  • Music:

more on "Walls of Stars"

Worked through the second scene (Andre and Jaqueline) and into the third scene (Andre, Zana, Leila and Chelsea). On the verge of the second half of the third scene (Andre and Chelsea). Also couldn't avoid tweaking the first scene (Andre and Zana).

At about 1600 words so far. I'm liking the story, especially the characters. Hopefully that should carry through to the end.
Tags: walls of stars, writing

  • My tweets

    Thu, 14:31: I'm impressed the pickup-full-of-pallets made it around the corner! I hope they weren't planning on getting on the freeway....…

  • My tweets

    Mon, 13:26: Easy to read, difficult to learn. (from zen-thought-a-day calendar)

  • My tweets

    Fri, 20:57: It's been an emotionally taxing day (and hectic, trying week and month, all full of change) so tonight it's frozen yogurt with…

  • Post a new comment


    Anonymous comments are disabled in this journal

    default userpic

    Your reply will be screened