jeffsoesbe (jeffsoesbe) wrote,

"Walls of Stars" continues

Worked through the fourth scene and the last scene in "Walls of Stars" today. The last scene (aka the sixth scene) was pretty easy, but I'm not quite sure how well it works. The fourth scene was a little harder, as that is the realization scene for Andre. So-so on that one.

Left is the fifth scene, the party scene, which should be pretty easy. The main thing to get right is the reaction of Chelsea, and I think I can do that. All the characters are going to need one pass of cleanup, and hopefully I can get that done before mailing it out to SacSpec.
Tags: walls of stars, writing

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